La Petite Mort

by Laine P. Grey

La petite mort. She thought as they drove away. She had done her crying earlier. In the dark where no one could see her. Yes, she was prepared for this day.

Yet somehow, she was not prepared for his willingness to leave. She wished he had hugged her for just a few more minutes, instead of joining the others.

It was funny, no, ironic that their three-some had become a two-some within two months time. Well, for now at least.

They had shared a few new inside jokes over the last two meals. Don’t you eat that nasty fruit! They’d laughed at the supposed song lyrics. She meant to reiterate that at their departure, but had forgotten.

Yes, la petite mort, but a small part also lives.

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  1. La Petite Mort

    Nouvelle Bardot's Buddy Icon Nouvelle Bardot

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    this holds so much mystery, beautiful. : )

  2. La Petite Mort

    MzScribe's Buddy Icon MzScribe

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    This really took me to a Parisian studio apartment during the 1940’s.
    your offhandedness while describing a passionate relationship…well done

    I just finished watching a French subtitled film about a married couple in the Resistance, and your ficlet took me back…

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