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Sasha's Promise

by MeAndTheMoon

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“Is everything ok, James?” Sasha asked with an inquisitive look in her eyes.
“Yeah, of course, I’m just…tired.” I replied, trying my best to be convincing.
“Good. You’d let me know if anything was wrong, right?” she asked as she slipped her arm through mine.
“Definitely.” I replied with feigned assurance.
“I just feel like I miss so much of your life since we barely get to talk or see each other. I want you to promise not to leave out anything important when we do get the chance.”
“I promise.”

I’m such a liar. I’ve left out the biggest thing in my life right now. I don’t love you anymore, I love Katie! is what I want to scream. But Katie doesn’t love me, so what’s the point of ruining the one chance at love I have?
Katie can’t love me, because when someone you love kisses you, you don’t compare their kiss to your brother’s. Even if they lie and tell you that they were thinking of someone else.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

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    Sailor Emo's Buddy Icon Sailor Emo

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Noooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!Ahhhhhhhh!! Stupid and/or blind people!!!!!!!!!

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    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    !!!! wat?? i totally need another sequel NOWWW !!! or else…the wrath of Mr. Darcy shall reign upon your writing!!!
    lol jk :) good job.

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    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    GRRR ! Now there is definite necessity of another sequel. Please please make it work out. but not yet.

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    MissJonas1492's Buddy Icon MissJonas1492

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    yes! sequel, please!

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    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    yay! man these stories are good home girl

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    SocccerISmyLIFE's Buddy Icon SocccerISmyLIFE

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Good Stories . . . . need sequels

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    RunningWithScissors' Buddy Icon RunningWithScissors

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    gahhhhhhhh. thats pretty. a little fast action and a tinybitt confusing in the end… tho that might just be me. :]] great jobbb.

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