Long Lost Relative (of the Chicken Queen)

by -LadyInRed-

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Becky went through her session as if it was a dream.The psychiatrist asked questions and she answered briefly,there was a chance that she wasn’t crazy.

The house was broken-down.It was in part of town where most of the the hobos lived.She knocked and the door fell down.It created a loud boom that seemed to be against all laws in the house.Then out of nowhere,someone said,

“Who’s there?”

Becky nearly screamed,and she saw a withered old man that had been behind her.

He looks like Gollum. she thought.That was good, he couldn’t hurt her,and if he tried to she’d break his brittle old bones.That was, assuming he had no thugs somewhere in the house.

“Do you know Anne Livenhill?”

The old man smiled. He laughed, which reminded her of nails against blackboard.

“So, who’s asking me?”

“I’m her daughter.”

“Oh look,my granddaughter’s visiting me. If you expect grandma to bake cookies for you,she kicked the bucket a long time ago.”

Becky was shocked.Chickens were no longer the problem.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. Long Lost Relative (of the Chicken Queen)

    -LadyInRed-'s Buddy Icon -LadyInRed-

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I know it’s a bit abrupt, but I tried. Rate it how you will! (But please, try to write a sequel) & LEAVE COMMENTS & RATINGS !!!!!!!!!!!!

  2. Long Lost Relative (of the Chicken Queen)

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 12 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    That was unexpected.

  3. Long Lost Relative (of the Chicken Queen)

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 12 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I liked that, especially the ending. I also like the eccentricity of this character…and I’m going to have to think on this.

  4. Long Lost Relative (of the Chicken Queen)

    The Raging Goblin Queen's Buddy Icon The Raging Goblin Queen

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I don’t get it. Maybe I’m just too tired. Or maybe I’m tired of the chickens. Can someone just end it already?! lol I guess that’s okay, I seem to keep coming back for more…

  5. Long Lost Relative (of the Chicken Queen)

    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted 11 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    ehh?? what just happened? why isn’t it about chickens anymore? i dont understand!

  6. Long Lost Relative (of the Chicken Queen)

    T.F. Torrey's Buddy Icon T.F. Torrey

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    I’m not familiar with the series, but I like the last line, and the harshness of “she’d break his brittle old bones.”

  7. Long Lost Relative (of the Chicken Queen)

    -PeacockQuill-'s Buddy Icon -PeacockQuill-

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I made a sequel, feel free and read and comment (very harshly please).!!!!!!!1

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