Lone Writer, you've been busted.

by Codename: &

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Lone Writer glances blankly at his other Ficlet window, blinking a yellow light, knowing what he’s about to see. He slowly nudges the mouse to the bottom toolbar and doesn’t even remember clicking or actually reading…he just knew it was there, suddenly, on his screen.

A ficlet was present, with his comment of…
‘interesting…’
underneath.

A new comment had just been posted, publicly humiliating his ficlet persona.

‘The AAAICOF has just indicted you with 10 hours of ficlet community service, replacing all your previous comments with a detailed analysis of the ficlet, including in-depth relations between social and economic presures and their influence on each ficlet, as well as the rhetoric and metaphorical balance of each character in their own struggles, noting, of course, the effectiveness of each literary technique used by the author in those respects.’

Use Lone Writer sighed. He shoulda known this was coming.

Prequels

Write a prequel

Sequels

Write a sequel

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Lone Writer, you've been busted.

    Fyora Cartagan's Buddy Icon Fyora Cartagan

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    ...huh? It took me reading this twice to get it, I’m either not fully present, or the wording was confusing.
    I think it was good though, other than that. :)

  2. Lone Writer, you've been busted.

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Haha, I like the consequence. I’ll have to find a way to use it sometime. >=)

  3. Lone Writer, you've been busted.

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    HAHAHHAA .

    i luvv it.
    we shuld all string together and actually, like, do tht for all the new ficleters!!!
    tht wuld b so PoPPiN!!!

  4. Lone Writer, you've been busted.

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    The AAAICOF has just indicted you with 10 hours of ficlet community service
    Could we really do that?

  5. Lone Writer, you've been busted.

    Lone Writer's Buddy Icon Lone Writer

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I’ve been caught! What shame…

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