Cap'n Crunch

by Stovohobo

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Over the next few days, I had grown as accustomed to seeing a freaky alter-ago apparition appearing as any girl can get.

He would always pop up in mirrors, so when I go to brush my teeth and my head comes back up from the sink, he’s kinda staring at me in this creepy way. But it’s no biggie.

I mean, c’mon. Most girls never have a boy following them around literally 24/7. Lucky, wasn’t I?

One day, as I was finishing my math homework, he decided to bring up that stupid perv again. I groaned. If there was anything I didn’t need reminding of, it was that. I had successfully stayed away from the internet for a week, but he insisted that the kid was still “stalking” me. I had never seen some stranger looking through windows, or anything. It was weird.

So I decided to check. Sure enough, as soon as I turned on my computer screen, about fifty thousand IMs awaited me.

?: Stop ignoring me.

?: I seeee you…

or even:

?: Mmm, Cap’n Crunch.

I had eaten Cap’n Crunch that morning!

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Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Cap'n Crunch

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 12 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    frosted flakes are better!!!!!!
    but the story’s still good =]

  2. Cap'n Crunch

    BetwINeen's Buddy Icon BetwINeen

    Posted 12 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Sequel…NOW!

  3. Cap'n Crunch

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 12 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i think we shuld stop writing for a day or two, build tension [and fans]
    ;-)

  4. Cap'n Crunch

    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted 12 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    why? I WANNA READ MORE !

  5. Cap'n Crunch

    Spring Chicken's Buddy Icon Spring Chicken

    Posted 12 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    ya pleeeaase write more

  6. Cap'n Crunch

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 11 months ago

    Stalkers can be such a nuisance, especially when they ruin a good bowl of Cap’n Crunch.

  7. Cap'n Crunch

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Whoa. Stovohobo, you are amazing! How easily you shift gears…wow.

  8. Cap'n Crunch

    Storykeeper of Fae's Buddy Icon Storykeeper of Fae

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Whoa. Stovohobo, you are amazing! How easily you shift gears…wow.

  9. Cap'n Crunch

    Saint Chuck's Buddy Icon Saint Chuck

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Awesome work. But a bit to realistic for me…shudder.

  10. Cap'n Crunch

    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great writing. You got the feature! Yeah!

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