A Single Day

by Suburban Saint

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She always talks different around me. This girl who always says she hates to write, suddenly has a way to say just the right thing.

“And we’ll live forever, just you and me, always.”

I look at her smiling, “Not me.”

She stares back, confused and feeling slightly betrayed.

“What do you mean?”

My eyes glance down at my feet and then back up into her beautiful brown eyes.

“If you live forever, I want to live to be forever minus one day,” I pause as her eyes begin to shine and her mouth begins to open into a smile, “So that I will never have to live a single day without you.”

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. A Single Day

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Awwwwwwwwww, wuvva wunderful wuver he is! =)

  2. A Single Day

    Note In a Broken Bottle's Buddy Icon Note In a Broken Bottle

    Posted 10 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    awww cute!!!!

  3. A Single Day

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 9 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    I love the beginning, but the ending . . . I’ll Ficlet a response.

  4. A Single Day

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 9 months ago

    So, the selfish son of a gun wants her to have to suffer through and grieve his death while she only has a day to live? That’s cold, man. That’s cold.

  5. A Single Day

    Suburban Saint's Buddy Icon Suburban Saint

    Posted 9 months ago

    whoa.. i never even thought of it like that. haha, good point

  6. A Single Day

    Three Gryphon[s]'s Buddy Icon Three Gryphon[s]

    Posted 8 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Cute, but Thx has a good point.
    What are the odds of them having a heart attack at the exact same moment?
    Excuse my ramblings, please.

  7. A Single Day

    Suburban Saint's Buddy Icon Suburban Saint

    Posted 8 months ago

    i suppose you guys are right.. maybe it should be that the guy says he wants her to die the day early so that she never has to live without him.. but isn’t that kind of macho or egotistical or whatever the right word for that is?
    not sure, thanks for the input

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