You read it, you name it.(more is coming)

by Mask By The Moon

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A girl, apparently no older than the age of eleven, walked briskly around the ruined village. She stood about 5’2”, not including the wispy blonde hair that floated on top of the shoulders of a brown trench coat. Her slender hands stayed in the pockets for the time being, each of them resting lightly on an important item. She yawned, showing thirty-two perfect teeth. Wincing with each step, she slowly strode through the place, straight line, no distractions. She even spoke the words.

“No distractions.” She had a slightly authoritized voice, despite her non-aged look. A sigh escaped her thin lips, and indecipherable sigh—it was nearly impossible to tell if it was from joy, boredom, or sorrow. She always took this shortcut, as there were – as she was oredered – no(or less, rather) distractions.

Although, the pain in her feet was slightly distracting. A small lie, she thought, looking down at her scorched feet. One lie and they burn my feet. Well, I guess working for him, honesty is the only policy.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. You read it, you name it.(more is coming)

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    ooooooooooo is she working for voldemort hahha. =]

  2. You read it, you name it.(more is coming)

    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted about 1 year ago

    haha sorry no.

  3. You read it, you name it.(more is coming)

    Brebelles' Buddy Icon Brebelles

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    good beginning

  4. You read it, you name it.(more is coming)

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Good beginning.
    That part that has a strikethrough – just put a space on either side of each hyphen – unless you want it to look that way.

  5. You read it, you name it.(more is coming)

    Blossom Ruoqen's Buddy Icon Blossom Ruoqen

    Posted 10 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Captivating beginning.
    Did you mean to say ‘authoritative’?
    either way, it’s nicely descriptive.

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