You read it, You name it.(little more)

by Mask By The Moon

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He gave her a nod, his sandy hair coming to meet his bright azure eyes. She met his with her own grey ones, unshaken.

“I’m here, early, now what is it you wanted?” she inquired, her mouth moving faster than her brain. She wasn’t thinking, just running off instinct. Then again, instinct disappears after a while. She may have been going off impulse.

“I want you to do me a favor,” he replied in a voice as icy as his stare. It wasn’t raspy, it was even deep, but it was cold. When she had first heard it she had nearly had a heart attack from the chills it sent down her spine. But her voice was what he feared most now. She knew it was. He never showed it though. Every time she saw the fear in his eyes when it couldn’t be kept back, she wanted to die laughing. But she didn’t. She stood stiff as a board, waiting for her orders.

“I want you to get rid of that boyfriend of yours,” he said. He had no clue what she had in her pocket. She intended to keep it that way.

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  1. You read it, You name it.(little more)

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    oooo! it’s a gun!
    BOOM

  2. You read it, You name it.(little more)

    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted about 1 year ago

    ‘fraid not, dahlin.

  3. You read it, You name it.(little more)

    Brebelles' Buddy Icon Brebelles

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    MWAHAHAHAHA

  4. You read it, You name it.(little more)

    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted about 1 year ago

    evil laugh! awesomeness!

  5. You read it, You name it.(little more)

    Stovohobo's Buddy Icon Stovohobo

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Ooh, this is intriguing….I like your descriptions and characters.

  6. You read it, You name it.(little more)

    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted about 1 year ago

    WHEEE ! I has impressed Stovohobo! oh gosh this MADE MY DAY

  7. You read it, You name it.(little more)

    Yeah Write!'s Buddy Icon Yeah Write!

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    a wedding ring! she’s gonna propose to her boyfriend! that makes no sense but …

  8. You read it, You name it.(little more)

    Yeah Write!'s Buddy Icon Yeah Write!

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    i say a knife! much better than the whole wedding ring thing

  9. You read it, You name it.(little more)

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    hahha MBTM .. made ur day hahha =]

  10. You read it, You name it.(little more)

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Great hook at the end.

  11. You read it, You name it.(little more)

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wonderful series, kept me wanting more.

  12. You read it, You name it.(little more)

    Mask By The Moon's Buddy Icon Mask By The Moon

    Posted about 1 year ago

    says the guy that said he didn’t like the last one.

  13. You read it, You name it.(little more)

    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    ...nice imagery here.

  14. You read it, You name it.(little more)

    Blossom Ruoqen's Buddy Icon Blossom Ruoqen

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    You have a very nice arsenal of cliff hangers here. good job.

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