Wondering Away

by NikkiC93

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’’I am A Person says Keeylee’’ You cant Just throw me Around ’’
’’Oh Really Could A Real Person Go through objects ’’
You are just lying to your self’’ Says Phobar
Well we’ll see ! The thing is Keeylees soul was wondering between the spirt world and the ’’real world’’ so at times she would apear as a ghost. Keylee goes out to find a mortal tell here the truth if she was human or a ghost but she would need to get close to them ! Keylee ’’ I am going to prove to you I am mortal ’’ Phobar ’’Fine because I know you will fail just wait child !

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Average Reader Rating: 2.0 stars out of 5

  1. Wondering Away

    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    ...if it’s not done then finish it. this is…really odd. nothing even happenes.

  2. Wondering Away

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    I couldn’t follow it.

  3. Wondering Away

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    this story goes reallllllly well with the picture – you pretty much explained both characters out =]

  4. Wondering Away

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    Posted 12 months ago

    2.0 out of 5 stars

    I think that it’s a good idea, very imaginative, but hard to follow because of the grammer and it needs more explaining.

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