Eye See

by NikkiC93

This Is a story about a boy who has an amazing power a power no one has every seen… All he had to do was look ! ’’ Eric Your Eye’’ Vanessa ’’Its Its changing colors ! Vanessa Watched as Erics iris color changed from green to brown back to blue ’’are you playing a trick on me are you ok ? ’’ No for the trick and yes for if im ok ’’ ’’ Its like I saw a rainbow of colors but just a few stood out like eye colors ’’ then all of a sudden a light beamed out of Erics eyes like a light on the front of a truck. it shown bright. Now Vanessa was worried. There was dead scilence as Eric and vanessa stood there not saying a word, a few seconds later a portal opened. Eric says kinda shaky but sure of his dicision, ’’ Come on lets go in’’ said Eric ’’ no way you dont even know whats on the other side are you crazy’’ ’’ Ok Ok ,says eric. Lets go’’ with a smirk and then started to walk in front of vanessa and the pushed here in the portal, and Eric Followed… What Will Happen Next ?

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Eye See

    NikkiC93's Buddy Icon NikkiC93

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Comment ! Pls

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    you can use the return/enter key inbetween the characters senctence – it makes it easier to read
    but i likeee the story!!! =]

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