Eye See 3

by NikkiC93

’’Eric Stop your scaring me’’ says vanessa then Eric zones back in ’’ I just had a vision’’ about what ? open your eyes wide and dont blink ’’ and sooner or later Vanessa had to blink ’’ha ha I win’’ eric says in an annoying voice ’’Eric ! ok ok’’ he says.’‘open your eyes wide and when I say go reapt what I say’’ ok ! says Vanessa in a strong voice.Go, Eye See’’ Eye see’’ You and me’’ You and me’’ two eyes as one will be ! two eyes as one will be ! they chanted then Vanessa fell in Erics arms.After a few minutes she woke. and Eric helped her stand straight. No more talking look ! woaaaah! how did I not see that there before ? come on let’s go in ! Vanessa started running toward the castle with out even waiting for a response from Eric or anything, so when they reached the castle it was pretty plain but It has a draw bridge and windows. when the walked in the walls had pictures of two kids and a rug going across the floor but at the end of the hall were thrones and A White light Pulling Eric Closer To it…...

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Eye See 3

    dancergrl1512's Buddy Icon dancergrl1512

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    very good i like it.. def cant wait to hear wat happens next

  2. Eye See 3

    NikkiC93's Buddy Icon NikkiC93

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    thx thx dancergrl1512

  3. Eye See 3

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted 11 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    i agree – whts gonna happn?!

  4. Eye See 3

    NikkiC93's Buddy Icon NikkiC93

    Posted 11 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    thx one time one cahnce

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