no title 2

by jinn

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what was wrong with him? why did he run? what did she do that was so wrong? he thought she was coming between him and his freedom,, “damn harley rider”,, if she wrote him what would she say???? she would tell him.. he was a cruel fisherman…. the bait had been consumed,,,, but the fish was left dangling… he wouldn’t release it or reel it in…

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  1. no title 2

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    Posted about 1 year ago

    Definitely evocative but perhaps a bit too minimalist for me. The fishing analogy is interesting, though.

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