Hopefully this title will catch your attention.Part 4.

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I wait. Not just for my mother to pick me up. For my life to get worse. For something to go wrong and never be properly fixed. It’s all going to happen sooner or later. Their car pulled up on the driveway. I walked away, feeling relieved. I stepped into the car.
“How was counseling?” My mother asked. Was she really this concerned?
“Fine”
Fine, everything was just peachy. Everything in my life ended with a nice walk in the sunset and delicious icecream. In my dreams.

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Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Hopefully this title will catch your attention.Part 4.

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Man this kid is full of angst. your ficlets are very short but compelling.

  2. Hopefully this title will catch your attention.Part 4.

    Kiarra's Buddy Icon Kiarra

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like this character

  3. Hopefully this title will catch your attention.Part 4.

    llamaluvsmenotu's Buddy Icon llamaluvsmenotu

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Is it really in your dreams for everything to end with ice cream?? beacuse you’d get awfully bloated awfully fast…

  4. Hopefully this title will catch your attention.Part 4.

    [ wall.doll ]'s Buddy Icon [ wall.doll ]

    Posted about 1 year ago

    The second to the last sentence is the best. I love this story, and how in the midst of hopelessness your character still maintains a sardonic humor.

  5. Hopefully this title will catch your attention.Part 4.

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Is it really in your dreams for everything to end with ice cream?? beacuse you’d get awfully bloated awfully fast…
    Yeah, but what a way to get there . . . Besides, the sunset walks would combat that, llamaluvsmenotu.

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