Tear

by SocccerISmyLIFE

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Tonight I cried. The tears fell down my face for:

The boy I thought I loved,

The best friend that just deserted me,

The blood that dripped down my leg,

The parents I couldn’t get a hold of,

The football game my school just lost,

The voice that I had lost,

The other girl with the same name as mine,

The best friend that won’t listen to me.

My reasons for crying are silly.

What are yours?

Are they anymore important?

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Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Tear

    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wow, im touched, it can be hard to put things like that to words, that was very good.

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    MissJonas1492's Buddy Icon MissJonas1492

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    WOW i really lovve thiss!!!!! ive totally felt like this b4! its like you read my mind! every time i cry i think”wow the things i cry about atre so stupid!” and now i know im not the only one. AWESOME AWESOME job!!!

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    KittyKatLover's Buddy Icon KittyKatLover

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    well written love it felt like this way before 2

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