The End

by Never Explain

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Jess is getting totally hormonal, I can’t believe in less than 6 months, i’ll have my own child. I’m a father, and way too early. I’m only 18 and she’s only 19. I didn’t know how we were going to afford this kid, I have to ask my parents, her parents, every branch of the family tree. Plus we aren’t even married yet. I can change that
1 month later
I finally scrounged up enough money to buy her a ring. I took her out to dinner and I proposed to her.
“Yes.” She said, with tears in her eyes.
I caught her in a tight embrace. I knew I would have a great life with her.
3 years later
I now have a family, I went back to school and got a P.H.D, i’m a lawer now, and i have a great life.
“I love, Jess.” I said.
“I love you too, Tom.” She said.
She said it, and she meant it.
THE END

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. The End

    Officially's Buddy Icon Officially

    Posted about 1 year ago

    2.0 out of 5 stars

    Eh. It’s good. It just ties up too neatly in the end. He had a baby at the age of 18, yet he still manages to go to college and become a lawyer? Too far fetched.

  2. The End

    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    i agree with officially, but i like happy endings =]

  3. The End

    LovingYourHeartbreak♥'s Buddy Icon LovingYourHeartbreak♥

    Posted 8 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    awwww i kinda agree with officially, but it is really sweet!

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