Outdistance Death With Insanity

by Amaryllis

He was running. Houses, trees, roads whizzed by in a blur. But try as he might, he would never be able to run fast enough to outdistance Death. How ironic.

He held her tightly to his chest, never faltering in his desperate sprint. Her tears soaked his shirt, spurred him on to run faster faster faster.

Finally, he stopped. Gently, he set her down, held her face in cold hands. “Is it true?”

“Yes. I’m going to die.” Her voice broke, so he wrapped trembling arms around her. She thought she saw a glistening in his eyes, but it couldn’t be. His kind was incapable of tears.

“The doctor said my blood is carrying a disease. There’s no escape.” She answered the question in his terrified black eyes. “Yes. It’s incurable.”

He held her fiercely in the dying twilight. Then a thought occurred to him. It was utterly impossible. But fear made him irrational.

He pressed his cold lips to her neck. She didn’t realize his intentions until she felt his teeth pierce the skin.

Until the poison began to burn through her body.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 3.5 stars out of 5

  1. Outdistance Death With Insanity

    horrorfan13's Buddy Icon horrorfan13

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    This is good. I didn’t look at the tags for the story, so the vampire thing threw me for a loop! But it needs to keep going. It may even need a prequel.

  2. Outdistance Death With Insanity

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Vampire thing threw me too, but I liked it. I do wonder about how they met, and why they’ve stayed together. I’m such a fan of Buffy, though, that if I wrote anything it’d probably be oddly familiar . . .
    ~
    I do wonder if the vamp here has signed the Treaty that Stovohobo speaks of.

  3. Outdistance Death With Insanity

    Amaryllis' Buddy Icon Amaryllis

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Hmm…..should I make the vampire thing more obvious? I kind of made it subtle on purpose but…I guess in this case that’s not a good thing? *
    Treaty? What treaty? Guess I’ll have to find out =)

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