Close Enough . . .

by Alexa ♥

“Yikes. Did the cheeseball factory pay you to take that line from them?”

“You don’t like it then?” I half-smile.

“Plus which, what’s that gonna do? Leave me to spend my last day mourning you, planning your funeral -.”

“OK, OK,” I hold up my hands in mock surrender. I really just say these things because I like the look on her face. “I suppose I should’ve said I hope we each live till we can take our last, dying breaths -.”

“Quit while you’re ahead.”

“I’m ahead?” I ask.

“Not really,” she laughs, brown hair shimmering down her shoulders, “but quit anyway.”

“I can’t. I need you to save me from myself.”

“Fine,” she rolls her eyes in mock-frustration, and then crosses the short distance to me, where she wraps her arms around my neck and pulls me in for a long kiss.

“My hero,” I murmur.

Her response is to blush, smiling slightly as she closes her eyes. And maybe that look doesn’t make everything right in the world, but it makes everything right inside me.

And that’s close enough.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Close Enough . . .

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    I fully admit to being a romantic sap.

  2. Close Enough . . .

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Wish I would have read that before posting my comment on the prequel. But I swear, I had that thought when I read it and before reading yours. I still say she should have kicked him in the…

  3. Close Enough . . .

    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Good dialog here.

  4. Close Enough . . .

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    I still say she should have kicked him in the…
    Over a cheesy comment? Sheesh. He didn’t even call her a bad word.
    ~
    Nobody upset THX 0477 . I have a feeling we wouldn’t like him when he’s angry.

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