I'm Right Here

by Suburban Saint

Can’t you see me? When we’re alone, its like I’m the only thing you’ve ever seen in your entire life and you wouldn’t close your eyes for fear that I might not be near when they open again. But now, with friends all around us, I melt back into the crowd. Bright in the darkness of solitude, now I simply shine amongst the rest.

You don’t know how hard it is to stand there being looked at just the same as everyone else. When I look at you, it’s like there’s a mask over everything else and you remain unveiled. Your smile would blind if it weren’t so loving. I’d be lost forever in your eyes if your hand weren’t there to pull me out.

But when you look at me, you are the one in the mask. Seeing everything, even the one that means so much to you, in a shadow. I know I shouldn’t always shine the brightest in your eyes, and you aren’t always as radiant as I describe.

But every once in a while, it would be nice for you to take notice of me. Every once in a while, it would be nice if you’d take off the mask.

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  1. I'm Right Here

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    how can anyone not take notice of someone who writes and thinks so profoundly, lyrically & so deep.

  2. I'm Right Here

    Batak Beatrix's Buddy Icon Batak Beatrix

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Nicely written.

  3. I'm Right Here

    Suburban Saint's Buddy Icon Suburban Saint

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    thanks guys

  4. I'm Right Here

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 10 months ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Such strong and truthful emotions.

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