A Dark And Stormy Night

by T.F. Torrey

It was a dark and stormy night. In the doorway of the cabin on the little hill in the big woods, I smoked a cigarette and watched the tempest. Lightning flickered and danced over the trees. Rain fell in great black sheets, and the wind howled around the cabin. I’d come here to find peaceful solitude, and this was not it.

“Strange weather, isn’t it, son?”

My heart skipped a beat at the sound of the voice. I turned to find my father standing behind me, looking over my shoulder out the door at the swirling storm. The yellow light of the gas lantern on the table by the door fell across his face, casting his wrinkled features into sharp relief. “Strange, indeed,” I said.

“Would you say the wind or the rain is the strangest?” he asked.

I looked out at the blustering storm, then back into his wizened face. “Neither,” I said. “The strangest part of the storm is you, here.”

Lightning flashed in his eyes, and the shadows on his face twisted into a smile.

“After all,” I continued, “you’ve been dead ten years.”

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  1. A Dark And Stormy Night

    YodaOnCrack's Buddy Icon YodaOnCrack

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Terrific ending and great writing. You made great use of that famous opening line too! There are some very well written descriptions in this. A tale well told.

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    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    wow, what an ending! didnt think it was a ghost story. you gave that tired, trite opening line new life.

  3. A Dark And Stormy Night

    jinn's Buddy Icon jinn

    Posted 10 months ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    you never fail to amaze,, i liked it

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    Batak Beatrix's Buddy Icon Batak Beatrix

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Awesome. Love the atmosphere you created.

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