Shelter From the Storm

by m8ryx

Reggie, disheveled and disoriented, climbed cautiously to her knees, eyes darting about, each time returning to that tarnished mirror, which somehow outlasted the stained glass and statues remaining unbroken.

Rain fell in sheets through the cathedral, flowing past a fallen candelabra, and cascading into a large crevasse snaking the ground before the alter.

Regina,” it whispered again. “_Tell me what you most desire._”

Regina stood, wiped her brow, and with another glance through the wreckage, stepped towards the mirror, avoiding rivulets, but soaking her red canvas sneakers in ample standing water.

The deluge soaked Regina’s hair, shirt, and jeans. Through the ruined ceiling lightning lit the sky behind the clouds.

Approaching the corner, the mirror radiant, Regina gained shelter beneath the sole surviving arch of the structure, its mossy stone affording protection. She pulled her shoulder-length almond hair back, shaking it out.

As stray drops struck the mirror, the shimmering surface rippled.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Shelter From the Storm

    cainegreene's Buddy Icon cainegreene

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Wow pretty good sequel to Mirror. Is there something behind the mirror or do we go through it to another place?

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    Batak Beatrix's Buddy Icon Batak Beatrix

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Love the descriptions. Think I might have to take the next round…

  3. Shelter From the Storm

    m8ryx's Buddy Icon m8ryx

    Posted about 1 year ago

    looking forward to it ;)

  4. Shelter From the Storm

    A Clockwork Apple's Buddy Icon A Clockwork Apple

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Very good attention to detail.

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    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Oh yes, very deep environment with loads of detail, amazing for a length-limited ficlet. Very taut and tense too.

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