I hurt... He hurts...what to do?

by LovedandAlone

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Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. I hurt... He hurts...what to do?

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted 9 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    That was hard to follow.

  2. I hurt... He hurts...what to do?

    Emilyscool's Buddy Icon Emilyscool

    Posted 9 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    i agree with Alexa…
    that was a bit confusing.
    but it’s very good writing

  3. I hurt... He hurts...what to do?

    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted 9 months ago

    2.0 out of 5 stars

    no. too much of a change of mood—from soap opera to deep and depressing? not liking it.

  4. I hurt... He hurts...what to do?

    NikkiC93's Buddy Icon NikkiC93

    Posted 9 months ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    how is that mature ???? and it is just a tiny tiny tiny bit hard to follow but i kinda got it !

  5. I hurt... He hurts...what to do?

    Fuchsia Deviant's Buddy Icon Fuchsia Deviant

    Posted 9 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Love it… I really liked how you described the yearning for the person…yet being afraid of being hurt again. I can totally identify with such a feeling. Very raw.

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