I hurt... He hurts...what to do?

by LovedandAlone

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I go inside… make some sweet peach tea… pondering… thinking…. What is the definition of “too cool”, the superficial, meaning of you talk and walk a certain way… that automatically defines your being. We spend our whole lives trying to…. The tea pot is screaming for my attention… so I grab my favorite cup, mix’er up, and plop down in my comfy chair… and look out the window. Ty, is out there… standing… and staring. Im thinking…. Can’t you get a hint… i start to tear up. Why do i crave his touch, and his attention. The way he peers into my soul, the fire he bestills within me… I could never let any one hurt me that way again.. i tell myself. By now im shaking and pouring tears. I just get in the shower… mom always said, when it hurt so bad… just pour it out in the shower… it seemingly disappears down the drain with the rest of drops.

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Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. I hurt... He hurts...what to do?

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    3.0 out of 5 stars

    Needs grammar help, but the emotion is right-on.

  2. I hurt... He hurts...what to do?

    IheartSoccer x10's Buddy Icon IheartSoccer x10

    Posted about 1 year ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    What the fliper!!!!! PEACH TEA !!!!!!!! SHE ’S 13!!!!!!!!!!!! AND DOESN ’T LIVE IN ENGLAND !!!!!!!!!!!

  3. I hurt... He hurts...what to do?

    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted about 1 year ago

    2.0 out of 5 stars

    im so, hopelessly confused…is there a reason soccer can’t keep writing this series?

  4. I hurt... He hurts...what to do?

    blueyedwonder's Buddy Icon blueyedwonder

    Posted about 1 year ago

    2.0 out of 5 stars

    plus, come ON guys, they’re 13!! I think people keep forgetting that.

  5. I hurt... He hurts...what to do?

    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted about 1 year ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    yeah idk why you had to try and continue soccerismylife’s story.

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