Oh it is love....

by LovedandAlone

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I studder, ” Ty, I can honestly say I love you just the same… but I can never let anyone tear me to pieces or leave my heart in shambles like that again… he grabs me holds me so close i can feel our hearts beating quickly, Linz, You are more than i could ever dream of… and he kisses me with more passion than i have ever felt in my life… Im too weak to fight him off, this has been such a long battle… he then looks at me, “can I keep you?” breathily, and so full of love, and fire… I tear up… and say, yes… he walks in shuts the door, and i tell him never, ever call me sugar buns, or any of that other crap… i laugh…. and we spend an amazing night together…. like its said… by hellogoodbye… “oh, it is love, for the first time….”

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Average Reader Rating: 3.0 stars out of 5

  1. Oh it is love....

    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    The way both people speaking ran together into one paragraph was just . . . {shudders}.

  2. Oh it is love....

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted about 1 year ago

    more like a poem. lose the quotations, they are missing in places anyway

  3. Oh it is love....

    -LadyInRed-'s Buddy Icon -LadyInRed-

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    who uses the word “shambles” so much, or to think of it, AT ALL !!! nice plot though.

  4. Oh it is love....

    IheartSoccer x10's Buddy Icon IheartSoccer x10

    Posted about 1 year ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    THEY ’RE 13!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU ’RE A BAD WRITER !!!!! STOP TRYING TO SEQUEL OTHER WRITERS WORK WHEN YOU RUIN THERE STORIES !!!!!!

  5. Oh it is love....

    FlirtingWithaBrickWall's Buddy Icon FlirtingWithaBrickWall

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    i frown upon sex at 13, or anytime before marriage, but it’s not nearly as bed as 1heartsoccer puts it. the girl who started the series writes like a 10 year old. no kidding.

  6. Oh it is love....

    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted about 1 year ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    well first FlirtingWithaBrickWall, i agree about the whole frowning upon sex thing, i think that LovedandAlone is just trying to make them older than they really are. Also it’s IheartSoccer x10, not 1heartSoccer (sorry just little things like that annoy me.)
    but also I disagree, Music2MyEars29/SoccerIsMyLife had a very good series going and I really enjoyed it. I think LovedandAlone runied it.

  7. Oh it is love....

    Phosphate11's Buddy Icon Phosphate11

    Posted about 1 year ago

    1.0 out of 5 stars

    oops i mean TottalyNotBlonde/SoccerIsMyLife
    (sorry my bad)

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