Rejuvenated

by Kevin

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Average Reader Rating: 2.5 stars out of 5

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    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    That was . . . a departure from the original.
    But your grammar’s much better!

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    User 5199's Buddy Icon User 5199

    Posted about 1 year ago

    uh…u went wayy of the topic

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    beakuz's Buddy Icon beakuz

    Posted about 1 year ago

    okay….

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    User 5347's Buddy Icon User 5347

    Posted about 1 year ago

    dude these kids are like 12 and 13. What the hell were you even thinking. If they were older, yeah, but DUDE !!!!!

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    penguincaptain18's Buddy Icon penguincaptain18

    Posted about 1 year ago

    its interest, but doesn’t flow at all with the rest of the stories. Linz really didn’t seem like a porn type of girl to me

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    Spring Chicken's Buddy Icon Spring Chicken

    Posted about 1 year ago

    i agree with penguincaptain. this isn’t like the rest of the stories at all, and this is waaaay out of Linz’s character. However it was well written, and if I didn’t know what Linz was like, this would be good.

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