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fresh start a new day

Ty goes home in the morning… I wave good bye to him in the window… Wow, I have never been one to be all smiles and super perky. The way he looks at me goes so deep. I get into my nikes for a quick morning run, turn on my ipod, and hit the pavement… its been quite awhile since i’ve had a happy run, not just to rid of stress. I couldn’t have done anything to make last night till he left any more wonderful. Its entirely amazing to understand the effect, a person can have on ones heart. Ty gets another shot… and I am as happy as a lark… I notice the colors of the dawn sky are still changing… heavy blue, to pale blue, and the deepest pink to orange, orange to purest white. Its been awhile since I stopped to notice the world around me… the birds are chirping and the weather is perfect after a stormy couple days its beautiful. For the first time… I feel so beautiful as well… nothing could ruin this day so far… when the start seems so blissful… i think, man I need to call my mom… and chuckle.

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fresh start a new day
IheartSoccer x10
Posted 11 months ago

STOP MAKING IT SEEM LIKE THEY LIVE ALONE , THEY’RE 13!!!!!!!!!!!!!! STOP MAKING IT SEEM LIKE THEY HAD S *X!!!!!!!
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IheartSoccer x10
Posted 11 months ago

HORRIBLE !!!!!!!!!!!!!
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IheartSoccer x10
Posted 11 months ago

TERRIBLE !!!!!!!!!
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IheartSoccer x10
Posted 11 months ago

DISGUSTINGLY HORRIFIC !!!!!!!!!!!
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IheartSoccer x10
Posted 11 months ago

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Sailor Emo
Posted 11 months ago

Oh my G! Iheartsoccerx10 is bein insaine, and I’m so sorry!This si good writing, but they are 13, but still pretty good
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penguincaptain18
Posted 11 months ago

i agree, they are like 13. it is pretty good however. the part were it says i sould my mom really makes her seem older
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Phosphate11
Posted 11 months ago

nope I disagree, IheartSoccer x10 is right, LovedandAlone ruined the series.
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Officially
Posted 11 months ago

I’ve been reading these, and while I’m not sure if they are the greatest in style or writing, I really wish the whole ‘you series ruiner, they’re 13!!!!!!!’ would just stop. That’s bull. It’s quite obvious that LovedandAlone simply took the general idea of the previous story and then changed it to a story of her own. No, LovedandAlone’s character ARE NOT 13 . She’s writing differently. All of the ranting and ravings is getting extreme.
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Officially
Posted 11 months ago

I’m also getting pretty sick of the ‘ruined the series’ ones. soccerISmyLIFE could start writing again back at Lips, the story that LovedandAlone picked up. So either stop reading it, or stop commenting. Please. Because you also seem to forget that LovedandAlone is a person, and her writing isn’t horrible.
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Officially
Posted 11 months ago

And IheartSoccer x10, just spell out Sex. Putting something other and an ‘e’ in there isn’t magically going to change the word that it is or the word that you intended it to be. Immature prat.
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Phosphate11
Posted 11 months ago

i think iheartsoccer x10 didn’t put the e because they probably thought it was going to get bleeped out. but yeah this series really isn’t that bad, i was just thinking that she was making 13 year olds do that, but i guess she is making a different story out of it.