Descent

by blueyedwonder

Bubbles streaming from his mouth, he swam almost straight down into the murky gloom. His shoes were soon waterlogged, lead weights to his unnatural speed, so he kicked them off without even pausing in his descent.

Swimming had always come so naturally to him. At 2, he was already in the deep end of the pool. At 4, he was surfboarding on a kickboard on vacations to the ocean. He hadn’t known why until 3 weeks ago, though he had always idly wondered.

Now he knew. Now he wish he had never found out.

As he swam, his thoughts turned to her. He knew she would be waiting for him anxiously on the old plaid sofa. He could envision her, twisting her hands in dismay, caramel eyes wide with worry. But she was so positive he would return.

“I’ll see you tonight, ” she had said with a sweet, light, innocent kiss. “I love you.”

Matt knew it was his fault he had downplayed the danger to her. But he also knew he loved her too much to see her that distressed.

Now, he could only hope he would return to her.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 5.0 stars out of 5

  1. Descent

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Hmm, somehow I got the idea the people were under the water, but now I don’t think they are, which makes way more sense. Now we just have to figure out just what is under the water, huh.

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    Batak Beatrix's Buddy Icon Batak Beatrix

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    Very interested to see where you plan on going with this.

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    Alexa ♥'s Buddy Icon Alexa ♥

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    I like the mood this sets, and I love that you’re putting the breaks between paragraphs. It makes a huge difference.

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    One Time, One Chance's Buddy Icon One Time, One Chance

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    hmm who’s this girl?
    very mysterious =]

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    NikkiC93's Buddy Icon NikkiC93

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    yea who is the girl and where is he going excatly ?!?1

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