The Lonely Whoosh of Space

by StrugglingWriter

“Captain, we’ve got a hole the size of an asteroid near Quadrant 25,” said Bill Veruck. “Captain?”

The Captain, the very man who took Bill under his wing some time ago, and who was grooming Bill to someday be captain of his own ship, lay motionless on the floor. “You’ll do great things someday, son,” the captain had always said. He never thought someday would be today.

Bill paused briefly to pay his respects then grabbed the intercom and buzzed Quadrant 25.

“Seal off that gap people. We’re losing air fast.”

All Bill heard in response was the lonely whoosh of space.

Bill’s heart dropped as he realized that he was now very alone on a disabled starship, stranded in the middle of nowhere. Maybe cruising through dangerous airspace with only a five person crew was a bad idea, Bill thought to himself as he made his way toward Quadrant 25.

Bill cursed his luck. Oxygen level 35 percent and dropping and he was going to be late for his date, a pure violation of rule #1: never keep a cute blonde waiting.

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.0 stars out of 5

  1. The Lonely Whoosh of Space

    ShadowWolf's Buddy Icon ShadowWolf

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Great continuation. The start came from a dream I had and the carrier floating in space holed was all I could remember… I spun the start from that image.

  2. The Lonely Whoosh of Space

    Robotech_Master's Buddy Icon Robotech_Master

    Posted about 1 year ago

    You know that the atmosphere of a normal earth environment only has about 21% oxygen, right?

  3. The Lonely Whoosh of Space

    StrugglingWriter's Buddy Icon StrugglingWriter

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    Robotech_Master – No I didn’t know that off the top of my head. I meant 35% of the ship’s overall normal oxygen level in the system (100% would be normal conditions), though this would be unclear from the ficlet.

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