This is an interesting style. I like how you personalized your character with the sentence length. The story does its job, making the reader think. I like it.

Oh yeah… Robert Frost Middle School. Love it!

um…so who is the little green man, lol

Yeah, I don’t understand what’s going on here.

Um, I don’t understand what’s going on either. What’s up with this author. Oh wait, it’s me. Yep, good call Alexa…just a random bit of nothin’, really just playing with style.

agree with everyone, sadly…maybe the sequel holds some answers?

this style is similar to those ive seen when a young sociopath or somone with a similar disorder is the narrator (or a young person being manipulated by a sociopath or someone with a similar disorder) it’s interested, im curious to see where this goes