Papa and Gregor Bury The Mysterious Chest

by Stovohobo

Rusty, rickety wheels clattered against the cold cobblestones as the morning damp settled on our working hands.

“Papa,” the boy said to me, looking up at me with those hazel Bambi-eyes of his (of course, Bambi wasn’t out yet, as there were no movies. Ahem. Get back to reading the story). “When are we going to stop?”

I curled my shivering fingers against the worn wood of the shovel’s handle. “When this is good and gone, son,” I said, winking a crinkly eye at him. (He was, technically, my grandson, but that’s beside the point.)

He sighed and poked a sliver of dirt out of the ground half-heartedly.

“A’right, this is deep enough, I think,” I said. We grasped opposite ends of the chest. “Heave!” I said, and we chucked that chest into the chilly hole in the ground.

“We ain’t never seein’ this thing again, are we, Papa?” Gregor asked.

“Nope, it’s gone for good, good and gone,” I repeated.

“Good,” he said, “it was scary enough last time.” We walked way away, way out to the wharf.

Comments

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  1. Papa and Gregor Bury The Mysterious Chest

    FlirtingWithaBrickWall's Buddy Icon FlirtingWithaBrickWall

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    what’s scary enough? awesome!!!

  2. Papa and Gregor Bury The Mysterious Chest

    THX 0477's Buddy Icon THX 0477

    Posted 10 months ago

    I like it, a nice little self-contained story that still suggests both history and potential future for the tale. And whole Bambi aside was hilarious.

  3. Papa and Gregor Bury The Mysterious Chest

    Batak Beatrix's Buddy Icon Batak Beatrix

    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    The Princess Bride-delivery of the narrative was very cute. Leaves a lot of potential for future stories.

  4. Papa and Gregor Bury The Mysterious Chest

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    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    love the sides comments, hmm wonder what they burried…

  5. Papa and Gregor Bury The Mysterious Chest

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    Posted 10 months ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    very nice, thx is right, history and potential.

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