Zach Thomas?

by N555champ /\and/\ X-Ninja (LoA)

Zack Thomas? He had been my old partner until that fateful day in 2003. I left the cafe, hands wriggling into my pockets as I set off towards the park at a brisk pace.

I sat down on the bench re-runing everything that had just happend through my head. First I had been attacked by a vase of roses, then I was told that my deranged partner was prbably after me, could it get worse?

Comments

Average Reader Rating: 4.5 stars out of 5

  1. Zach Thomas?

    N555champ /\and/\ X-Ninja (LoA)'s Buddy Icon N555champ /\and/\ X-Ninja (LoA)

    Posted about 1 year ago

    sort of short….. wanted to get to the sequel which origionally wasn’t going to be part of this series

  2. Zach Thomas?

    m8ryx's Buddy Icon m8ryx

    Posted about 1 year ago

    4.0 out of 5 stars

    actually, I’m liking the ultrashort chewing gum approach to the ficls of this story. Nice rolling narrative.

  3. Zach Thomas?

    SKermitgorf's Buddy Icon SKermitgorf

    Posted about 1 year ago

    5.0 out of 5 stars

    nice quick read, short, but good.

  4. Zach Thomas?

    N555champ /\and/\ X-Ninja (LoA)'s Buddy Icon N555champ /\and/\ X-Ninja (LoA)

    Posted about 1 year ago

    Thanks a lot that really made me feel like I wasn’t shorthanding all of the readers out there!

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