Stories posted 11/29/2007
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Best Buy+Black Friday=NOT GOOD{OTOC Challenge}

I step into the Best Buy cautiously. I dont even know why Im here. Guys do some crazy stuff for their girlfriends. Great. I j…
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Our Argentina

“Have you seen my daughter?” She frantically pushed the photo into the man’s face. “I’ve lost her. She’s been gone now for ov…
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Taking It Seriously
“Ruuun!”
She screamed. I looked back and found that the hunter had decided to chase me instead. He smirked and started walkin… -
just a small peek at wytherwing's ipod [ llamaluvsmenotu's challenge]

1) Wrong by School of Fish
2)Whispering Pines by Band (my dad put it on my ipod, dont really kno why.. but its cool, i like i… -
Why?
Why did she feel so left out?
Lauren was a pretty girl with good friends, good grades, loving family and was generally consi…
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Lovers Worry(Shocking Dialouge Challenge)

“Don’t leave, I love you!”
“Well, maybe I don’t feel the same. “
“You have to! I can just tell!”
“Listen, Sophie, I don’...
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Battologizzze
The lithe little girl emerged from the dark shadows of the hallway. She was draped in a pale pastel material that hung close …
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To Serve Man
The kettle begins to whistle, and before the sound has a chance to pick up any real volume the droid lifts it off the small g…
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Not Strong Enough

The chair was hard, the wooden back pressing into her body. Lily gripped the sides tightly, her knuckles turning white, her b…
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Portrait

The sounds of our feet hit the tile floors, echoing as the guide drones on, telling us about each painting. But I am not list…
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Mariana's Decision
She cradled the baby in her arms. No one was going to take it from her! Not now, not ever!
“Please Mariana, just do what the…
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The End Of My Existence
An emotional ride, I’m always caught up in this game,
I don’t know that to do, where to go, what to say.
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Some Help Please??
I need some help. I’m hoping all the other ficleteers can help me out. Hoping..
Anywaaaaaaays. This is what I need some he…
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Outbreak v1.11

You retreat back inside the house. You’re not at all hungry. Your nerves are doing backflips at the thought of you attempting…
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Outbreak v1.12

The gun feels smooth in your hand. Such a small thing could do such immense damage. Luis and Andrew are ready and proceed cau…
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Outbreak v1.13

One more flight up and you find the source of the smell. There’s a body, that’s not quite a body. Skin is ripped off its face…
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The Wrong Lane Part A

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Outbreak v1.14

“What the hell was that all about? We gotta go back for him,” you yell.
“We can’t, he’s infected.”
“By a bite? So their like… -
The Wrong Lane Part B

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A Matter of Seconds

He crawled under his red and yellow sheets, still shakened up from his little car accident experience. He balled up in a circ…
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John and Ray

He stared at the printout. There it was. “J E S S I C A”, repeated over and over.
He first thought about calculating the odd…
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Everything Will Blow Pt. 10
“Well, the fights are breaking out left and right between the protestors. The police have called in the riot squad.”
“Ohhh….
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Midnight Breakfast

She woke up the next morning thinking about him. She wasnt mad at him, she just understood he had a tough career & that he wo…
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What?!

Ohmygaud. He kissed me!! Sure, it was quick, but whatever. It was with him, and it happened. That’s all that matters.
I …
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His Addiction Calling

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Patrick

I didn’t know who it was, I just turned around and saw a black and white jersey (the highest on the food chain.) and ran for …
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So much for being friends 2

meanwhile
“you are so cute,did you know that?”Julie says as she feeds joe ice cream.
“Uh thanks.you too!”He says
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Outbreak v1.15

”...I’m going to kill someone,” you scream. Luis runs in with a flashlight shown on the assailant’s face. Your eyes widen. It…
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A NEw ViEw

For a flash, thats all he saw. He didnt see a flash back of his life like it portrays on television. He didnt see his family,...
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Office Antics
Flyers were everywhere; No one knew who put them out, the hall was filled with people whispering. I walked down the long stre…
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HiS dARk roOM

He punched the stainless glass, but it didnt break.
CAN ANYONE HELP ME!!! LISTEN 2 ME I NO UR LISTENING! FINE, PRETEND LIKE …
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I Love Him (Prequel to I Love Her)

He hugged me tighter than he ever held me before.
His fingers, his skin felt so smooth against my body. This is the first non… -
I Love Her (Sequel to I Love Him)

Could she see what I seeing? I miss her so much, I just want to make her feel like … good cause thats what she should feel …
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part 2:lost freindship found again

Ohh….... I have to go can i ummmmm call u tonight???
Ya…
Is it the same number??? If so i still have it….
Yes it is….
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Different Directions
Dan caught her eye across from the opposite side of the tracks, she had on pink, I thought to my self how flattering is that …
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Horror House (part one)
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Horror House (part two)
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Horror House (part three)
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Horror House (part four)
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Horror House (part five)
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In For It

You never know if the war is over, or maybe it was just the battle. Who knows? Well one thing is for sure, I need to get my m…
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The Other Side of Darkness (dawn)

trust her; she was not one of them. The safe house seem to be engulf with blackness, it was two hours before day light would …
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Empty

Your eyes open surprised your still alive.
Your frail body aches but you jump to your feet,
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Things Don't Fall Apart on Their Own
Someone I trust once told me that things simply do not fall apart on their own. “So what did you do?” they asked. “So what di…
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scared
scared
im scared
for you
for me
for us
for life
for love
for lust
for desire
for completion
for guilt
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Go Home

I had dinner and went to bed – I was exhausted. This was just enough drama for one day, I certainly didn’t want to stay awake…
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Taquilla Sunrise

with the main desk line. I heard a scream coming from Janet office, someone had copied the flyers and papered clip them to he…
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Aww Hannah

Everybody started talking at once:
“I was there I saw the who-”
“And then she totally made ou-”
“But he didn’t tell me at …
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Poem (READ IT! MY FRIEND NEEDS FEEDBACK)
Okay. Okay. Poem, no title, one that my friend wanted me to give her feedback on before she gave it to her 16 year old boyfri…
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Dr. Vikram Jarial

“Wow! I don’t mean to sound rude, but that’s a pretty heavy bench press for a guy your age. How much weight is that?”
“Let’s…
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Noticed (part 1)
Do you ever feel like your invisible? Like no one knows you exist . You just want to be noticed but no one will even say ‘hi”...
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Noticed (part 2)
You want people looking at you and saying “wow she’s pretty”. You want to be noticed and you’ll do just about anything to be …
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He Deserved It

“YOU LOW LIFE SON OF A B**! THATS WHAT YOU THINK THAT NOTE WAS ABOUT? OH MY GEEZ! YOU DID TAKE ME TO THE CHRISTMAS DANCE, I…
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Kidnapped

Her eyelids fluttered open, catching a short glimpse of the pink dawn before sand filled them. She sat up, only to be shoved …
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First Snow

This is the part of winter I both love and hate.
The first snow is often beautiful, masking the monotonus browns of dead le…
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Fritz and Zooey: A Black Comedy

They were silent for a moment, before Zooey took a dramatic sigh which indicated she was going to assert conversation.
“So,...
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The City of Lies

Here I walk in my home town. The place where I’ve been for several years now.
There’s no exit. It’s just closed in.
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Towel Monster 8

“Two a.m. this Saturday. The cops will have their hands filled with drunks enough to overlook us should anything happen,” Jac…
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Claymore 1
“Life is only what you make it.” Gentle waves lap at the white sandy beach on the monitor. “Why don’t you go for a morning ru…