haha that is really funny, first dinosaurs now an army
a and b were funny. good ficlet, entertaining dialouge.
Did they jump to a different time? Still very fun.
Yes, they did. I just didn’t want to deal with the scientific aspect, so I left it up to the reader’s imagination.
I haven’t read the prequel, but I think I know everything I need to know about these characters and their situation from this story, which I loved. Minor constructive criticism: I’d lose the a) and b) and just reveal the two things. Unless a) and b) is a device you’re using in a series on purpose, in which case I’ll be quiet now. (I really liked it.)
I haven’t read the prequel, but I think I know everything I need to know about these characters and their situation from this story, which I loved.
Minor constructive criticism: I’d lose the a) and b) and just reveal the two things.
Unless a) and b) is a device you’re using in a series on purpose, in which case I’ll be quiet now.
(I really liked it.)
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