I liked the last line…cute.

WOW ! I’m quite sure I won’t die now.

Wow, very interesting prospect. You’re really creative, I applaud you.

Neat. I like the cross between mermaid and sword-toting vampire. It’s an unusual mix.

What I was going for here is that mermyds aren’t happy and pretty and preppy airheads like arielle from the little mermaid, but they’re…sorta powerful, and dangerous, and they could be evil if they wanted to, but they have enough charisma that they’re not. If that made sense at all.

I love the last part and dose mat no she is a mermaid ??