haha—thats pretty cool keep it up

Love the series. Can’t wait to see where it goes next.

Great descriptions Batak…can’t wait to see if the mirror is bad or good or indeterminate.

throught the mirror…, you gotta sequel it. love the 1st paragraph and use of some words I rarely see – aqueous, undulating

I enjoyed it. I can see the archaeologist in you here. My thoughts: eliminate words when possible. So “She cautiously, slowly, moved towards the mysterious object.” or “She was drawn to it in a trance.” Or maybe even “Despite the screams from her rational mind, the voice quieted her fears, moving her forward in a trance.” Keep up the good work Batak.