I like reading your theatre stories, largely for voyeuristic reasons, with quite frankly a large dose of prurience. Its like I am reading your racey diary. Any some constructive criticism: your opening line is awkward, and a run-on. The best opening lines grab a reader, but its ok to open with a simple sentence that orients the reader to the story. “Mike was a mystery.” Or “Mike gave more mixed signals than a broken traffic light.” But keep up the good work.
Kevin
Kevin
Alexa ♥