deep thoughts, good poem, makes ya think. Life is hard. but well worth it.

deep thoughts
the ryming was kinda sucky though
it made the poem uneven
it was okay
not ur best

wow that is how to put it, great job!!!

SoccerIsmyLife, I have no clue what you are talking about, the ryming was beautiful.
Amazing job darling!!!!!! This was terrific!!!

somtimes its hard…….to live this life

good poem love it olve ure work!!

5 stars