I am so sorry but I hate the title and this story is foolish to me but other wise I love the rest sorry If I offended you but I have read some of your other work I know you could do better you are a very great author

I agree that maybe a different title would be nice, but I really like it. It’s short, but it gets the point across, and it’s pretty powerful. I mean, getting hit because you had hair in your face and couldn’t see…

wait on second thought if u think about it in a emotinal deep way but not how it is read like if u think of the wool pulled over his eyes or he didnt even have a chance to take action

I disagree. I think this is great. And the title fits. Maybe I am old… old fashioned.. not “hip”… However you care to “label” but I am constantly ruffled by the new hairstyles that cover the eyes, or eye. I definitely see the troubles these “styles” cause and not just tragedies. This is a great piece.