eh, eh…not as good as your first…but not bad, per say. just…idk…short, maybe? something’s not right, but I can’t tell what exactly…

very cute!

this is quite adorable if i dont say so myself

its nice to know some gentlemen are not afraid of showing their feelings
i commend you on that

i like it. I write songs, most of my ficlets, so i think good job!