Okay, that first sentence…absolutely wonderful. It would be impossible not to read on with a first sentence like that. Great story idea (and honestly, it wouldn’t be shocking if something like this were to really happen on reality TV, lol).
It was okay, but I kept wanting it to be more satirical. Not to say that the sarcasm wasn’t there.
“Her name was Lola, she was showgirl…” “L-o-l-a, Lola, she looked like a woman but talked like a man…” Why does Lola make such an amusing name for a character? Odd little piece but definitely amusing. (in case people don’t get the references, the first one is from Barry Manilow’s ‘Copa Cabana’, and the second one is from ‘Lola’ by The Kinks.)
“Her name was Lola, she was showgirl…”
“L-o-l-a, Lola, she looked like a woman but talked like a man…”
Why does Lola make such an amusing name for a character? Odd little piece but definitely amusing.
(in case people don’t get the references, the first one is from Barry Manilow’s ‘Copa Cabana’, and the second one is from ‘Lola’ by The Kinks.)
THX I LOVE that you knew where that came from…. I’m torn on if I should continue this story…
Go for, at least for the sake of humor alone.
Fuchsia Deviant
Laine the Grey
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jesithepoet
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