Wow…that would be quite a twist. Good story.

very interesting

the suspense builds

come on kermit
hit us with another one!

I like, very neat to get the introduction of the three sons. And certainly not an unreasonable direction for her mind to go, the anger/aggression towards the suns showing up in the dream since she thinks they would be the ones to pay the ransom. Very nice.

Great job. Keep it going.

coolness. I wish we had a “series watch” on here… I could use it

woah! yay for foreshadowing

i totally think her three sons captured her =]