Hmm, it’s exciting. I think I’ll reread it in the morning and see what I think.

There is some unbridled talent here. I liked this. Key to being a good writer in the fast paced 21st century mindset involves creating visuals – this one does it…. The grammar is very good – the rest will come – eliciting an emotional response from the readers is something I think is ripe and ready here.

That is the nicest comment I’ve ever gotten!
Thank you so much!