Hmm. I’d like to see where you go with this. It sounds interesting.

I love the line “but did that jerk me out of my teenage surliness…” Great, great teenage angst sort of stuff.
And really neat that I used that same picture as inspiration too! Here’s the link to a drastically different story, once again proving the infinite possibilities within creative minds! Ha ha!
http://ficlets.com/stories/7480