It’s pretty good

This is pretty good. I would love to see prequels and sequels.

…nice. tendril, not tendril. nice descriptions, but lacking…something. not sure what =/ i sry.

Whoops! I forgot to spellcheck. I agree, it is lacking something, but I was (and still am) dead tired when writing this, and I just grabbed a thought and went with it.

Thank you everyone for the comments and ratings! (This is also a thanks in advance for possible comments later.)

I liked it. I could feel for him. Now just wondering what he’s late for. Is it a very important date?