Yoda, you have an odd ability to enthrall with such simple words and phrases. I am always left wanting more, especially now.

Why thank ye kindly, ma’am. I do aim to please…. : )

Great, but just not my style :)

And still in character even in the comments section. That’s commitment right there, people! I liked the line about ‘famous for something other than killin people’.

Very authentic western style writing, I’m a fan of the genre, you did it justice, very realilistic!

Well thanx ficlet friends – this is a new genre to me, but enjoyable. I am trying to cross this over from Western into Halloween genre. We’ll see how successful I can be….

The meals were pretty good and the jail cells were as big as a full moon.
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Awesome line! I can’t wait to read the next part!
- The Masked Stranger

Behold my humble attempt at a sequel.

cool! even though I’m reading each part of the story backwards there still good!

Precious Comely? What a name. What a name.

like a Robert B Parker western, love the 1st person point of view.

I agree with Skeet.