ah yes it made me laugh

snaps to you

i like the really poetic build up and the deep and meaningful descriptions and then the change to his situation

favourite line – Apparently, when her brother is present would be the answer to that question. lol

was a sweet story until the surprising twist at the end, loved the line- could be the booze talking, stared out s\such a romantic story about a flower, which i though, gonna be sweet but boring, but was anything but boring. great job as usual Thx

great description—that last bit surprised me. good job

Deceptively sweet prose, keeps a reader on their toes. Really great.