I really like it. The style and flow come across as very casual/natural/not at all forced, like we just happen to be over hearing a conversation between two people comfortable with each other. And then on top of that you cram a lot of detail in between the conversation and in the conversation.

very well told, loved the conversational style. Now I want to meet Giggles!

Carnie reunion! sweet! Was Ruby brushing the lint off significant, or was it just what she she did at the time? (Sorry, I may have missed something but I’m reading fast b/c I should be doing homework)

Just part of the story, Brick wall – had to cut it off there due to the character limitations….