see?

i KNEW you could write a sequel
and a very good one at that

oh the intrigue

and Mindsey Mohand?
nice ;)’

and wait…i’m confused…i re-read it just then and is the girl having an affair with mindsey or ellroy??

affair with Ellroy

Oh, I liked the affair with Mindsey better. But okay, I guess then you’d have to mark it ‘mature’.

Ok Mindsey it is, works better! thnx THX

Youse (THX & ARTISTS ) are very helpful to me!

I liked the idea…..

much much better
and lol to THX about the mature rating
but im sure lesbians are pg? non?!

and YEAH for some aussie vernacular
youse lol

but…before you had somewhere to go with it and now all you have is a lesbian killer…well, i guess that’s a whole plot in itself!!