just for anybody who read my comment in the prequel – i don’t really have a concussion. the only thing in here thats non-fiction is that i’m really a soccer striker. the rest is fiction, as are most stories on ficlets =]

Wow…really like this. I thought at first the character was being kidnapped, though, but the last line made it all fall into place.

hostage all she saw, instead of hospital. she really did have a concussion.

I like the formatting, and there is some good dialog here.

One Time, One Chance,I think ur life is one big concussion.

its ok
shes my bff in real life