Liked the setting. The time and space shifting while skirting a black hole awesome!

An ordinary everyday thing like brushing teeth/going to school—in a rather original sci- fi setting. Geat job.

Just wonderful. I loved the way you paced this, like you were slowly pulling back to reveal a painting. It’s tough to put a complete story into 1024 characters, but you did it.

Nice. I love how the first 3 paragraphs let us know the situation of the general population, and then in the end, we learn about one little girl to identify with and root for.