Excellent use of the word ‘frak’. Nice back and forth between the two.

And that’s where it was all going. Nice delivery, by the way.

I like the slow reveal there. Plus, the information the Acme Demonological Warehouse Supply can’t ship virgin blood should prove to be helpful in the future.

a bear-trap glare you’d have to chew your own leg off to get out of.- best line. also loved Y’know- I might have to borrow that sometime! ,and frak. great dialouge.

And the story goes on… You’ve got a sequel!